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打game整片 ....請師兄比意見

我知道你落左好多心機
不過老實有好多要改進
你最後果條片根本根本同三條原片PLAYLIST播無分別...
你自己睇就知
3:36一條片
唔順序跳黎跳去睇都無問題
無線索,無主題,無主角
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09" Giant TCR2

JN8:12 I am the light of the world; he who comes with me will not be walking in the dark but will have the light of life.

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